This edition of Photo of the Month was judged by Giordano Ciampini. Twitter / Website
FEATURE
1. FEAJanCGD03
2. FEAJanCGD01
HM. FEAJanNP1
This category was a bit thin on the “found" moments in that the subjects seemed camera aware, the moment wasn’t at the peak of action, or the image’s technical qualities were lacking (out of focus, sunken shadows, weak crops). The features which won and placed were solid moments which show the slice of life in a given person’s world. Although the content, being foreign or far-off places, can impact how we take in the information, the moments found were decidedly relatable from a domestic perspective, either due to the location or due to the human activity.
First place is unreal. The content being what it is, technically it’s a solid frame, tack sharp, and at a moment where the subject seems to be entirely oblivious or ambivalent about the photographer’s presence.
Second place is an aesthetically pleasing image, it’s something you’d see on the wire or in a paper as a weather feature, or as part of a picture story /essay as a frame you can add in to take a ‘breath’ from the main thrust of a story.
Third place has an interesting human subject (I have a soft spot for taxi drivers) in their natural environment, but it can be said to be picking from low-hanging fruit. This image would have benefitted from a bit lower shutter so we can see a bit more drama in the field of view beyond the driver in the rear view.
The HM is a great little slice of a workplace, it begs questions relating to what sort of factory this is. It didn’t place because although the moment has charm to it, it is on the wrong end of the centred subject. Would have liked to see a face.
Walk about lots, be out in the world with people, the moments are just waiting for us to witness them.
NPAC defines the feature category as: A single photograph of an unstaged situation that has a high human interest element and/or a fresh view of an everyday scene.
NEWS
1. NEWJanCAE2
2. NEWJanVGT2
3. NEWJanYag1
Toronto, Ont (01/21/17) — Niki Nephin and her daughter Millie joined the estimated 60,000 protesters for the Women’s March on Washington in downtown Toronto. Photo by Yader Guzman. |
1 - CAE2
2 - VGT2
3 - YAG1
HMs - VGT1 & CGD03
Protest pictures can be compelling but they inherently can also drift into cliche. Many of these would have been helped by finding moments or graphical elements in the fore- and background to tell the story instead of focusing on people’s signs (although there *is* a time and place for that if the thrust of the story is signage). There was also a distinct lack of spot news, which is an essential skill set that needs to be developed in order to work the freelance circuit as well as for would-be staffers. When you learn the rhythm of a city, you get an idea of when trouble tends to start, and failing that, you can always listen to the scanner for a few hours.
First place is a great little moment to catch the PM in. He’s an inherently photogenic person, so grabbing photos of him during those in-between moments of composure is important to the news of the day, it’s how we show that those in power are human beings like the rest of us, in spite of the power they wield.
Second place is a really lovely little moment between mom and daughter. Be aware of including children in protest pictures, because largely they aren’t capable of giving consent and are brought along by more politically-minded parents. It’s important that we, as photojournalists don’t use the most vulnerable amongst us as props or political tools. This is one instance which protesters can be humanized without being exploitative.
Third place is very well composed and an aesthetically pleasing image to view, but it didn’t place higher due to the news value in the image. General news should be compelling and timely subject matter as well as technically adept and aesthetically pleasing, viewers need to actually see the news value in it without having to read the caption. I would have categorized this as a feature rather than news.
The HM is a great series of portraits, but needed to be labelled as a composite image, as it is a series of photos placed on a canvas. There is news value in streeters or portrait series, but make sure to posit them in a way where I can identify what the story is through the environment the subjects are located in. Kudos for a well shot and interesting set of pix, and especially for including a variety of colours and ages. All too often we prioritize the faces and voices of non-POCs (people of colour), and although over 70% of Canadians are either immigrants or children of immigrants, POCs are highly underrepresented in news photographs.
NPAC defines the news category as: A single photograph with serious content and strong human interest elements of a scheduled or organized news event (e.g. mourners at a funeral, protesters, press conferences or staged coverage opportunities). The association defines spot news as: A single photograph of an unscheduled news event for which no advance planning was possible.
HM. NEWJanCGD3
HM. NewJanVGT1
1. SPTJanMBS2
2. SPTJanJRL1
3. SPTJanVGT1
1 - MBS2
2 - JRL1
3 - VGT1
HM - MBS3
This category was marked by a failure to capture the peak action of the athletes, save for a couple of moments. I know it sounds harsh, and capturing sports isn’t easy, but there is room for improvement here. Several photos would have benefited from better crops, but I can see where they’re going.
First place had the action right there, the reaction on 13 is great, captured at the right moment, and almost at the right framing. While tight crops are preferred for most sports, there’s not enough of the ball in the upper third, would have liked to see it more clearly.
Second place is a photo you’d likely see from a Raps game, the moment when the driving player hits the defence. It’s a solid, serviceable basketball image, but would have benefitted from better toning and cropping.
Third place image has some great emotion in it, but it’s lost in the far end of the frame. Cropping this would have yielded a better visual solution, but the timing was pretty good. Crops are everything in sports images.
PORTRAIT
1. PRTJanCGD2
2.PRTJanNP3
3. PRTJanNP2
2) MPXJanCGD01
3. MPXJanCGD02
MULTIPLE PICTURES
1 - CGD03
2 - CGD01
3 - CGD02
Only one photographer entered three sets into this category, I would strongly advise folks to reconsider what they believe a picture story/essay is, as you don’t always need foreign or controversial content to tell stories. There are stories all around, some big, some small. It’s our responsibility to tell them.
First place is a great “day in the life” feature of this woman Laura Avila. Living on a pile of refuse is not a life that many of us can recognize as being akin to our own, however the photographer assembled a solid edit of images which give the subject prominence in their daily activities, and gives them dignity in a situation many of us might want help out from. The subject is humanized through a series of images which take us from wide, giving context to the subject, through to tight-tight-tight to see hands that could easily be our grandmothers’ hands.
Second place is yet again a good “day in the life” feature of a group of fishermen. Technically perfect, lots of breathing room to take in the locale and context. Solidly composed and edited images, however it falls flat in that it doesn’t delve deeper. I would love to see where these men call home, if they go to the bodega and straight home, or if one of them heads to the bar. I want to know something about these people’s lives, and I don’t get that in this beyond their vocation.
Third place is a gritty street story that shows me a lot of drug use and not much else beyond. It tips its toe into a deeper underlying family issue, and the wider political context, but ultimately lacks direction and is focused on the direct subject matter of the petty drug trade rather than the human dimension of what happens to these young men after the sun falls.
Updated Points 1,845 - Chris Donovan 1,140 - Vanessa Tignanelli 545 - Andrew Ryan 520 - Noah Park 300 - Yader Guzman 220 - Bea Serdon 175 - Lori Christmas 100 - Colin Emerson 60 - Raven McCoy 50 - Jonny Ludlow 50 - Liam Smyth 25 - Curtis O’Connor 20 - Aman Parhar Past Points 1,385 - Chris Donovan (+460) 1,055 - Vanessa Tignanelli (+85) 545 - Andrew Ryan 435 - Noah Park (+85) 275 - Yader Guzman (+25) 175 - Lori Christmas 100 - Taylor Bertelink 100 - Bea Serdon (+110) 60 - Raven McCoy 50 - Liam Smyth 25 - Curtis O’Connor 10 - Aman Parhar (+10) 0 - Colin Emerson (+100) 0 - Jonny Ludlow (+50)
1 - MBS2
2 - JRL1
3 - VGT1
HM - MBS3
This category was marked by a failure to capture the peak action of the athletes, save for a couple of moments. I know it sounds harsh, and capturing sports isn’t easy, but there is room for improvement here. Several photos would have benefited from better crops, but I can see where they’re going.
First place had the action right there, the reaction on 13 is great, captured at the right moment, and almost at the right framing. While tight crops are preferred for most sports, there’s not enough of the ball in the upper third, would have liked to see it more clearly.
Second place is a photo you’d likely see from a Raps game, the moment when the driving player hits the defence. It’s a solid, serviceable basketball image, but would have benefitted from better toning and cropping.
Third place image has some great emotion in it, but it’s lost in the far end of the frame. Cropping this would have yielded a better visual solution, but the timing was pretty good. Crops are everything in sports images.
PORTRAIT
1. PRTJanCGD2
2.PRTJanNP3
HM. PRTJanAP1
PORTRAITS Or, how I got a guy to pose nude with a banana.
Srsly guise, I need to hear the story about this one…
1 - CGD02
2 - NP03
3 - NP02
HMs - AP1 & CGD03
Overall, this category was fairly strong, with some great subjects and interesting graphic elements.
First place is a great frame. Beautiful colours, mysterious subject, very simple, direct, natural. This photo draws me in and makes me ask questions, but also gives me enough of the subject to understand a bit about her. I would have liked to see more of what looks like her sleeping area, to the left of the frame, but it provides me with a lot of data to read a story into and it’s aesthetically pleasing from a compositional point of view.
Second place is such a curmudgeonly image. Dude’s got so much character, but this didn’t place higher because of a lack visual dialogue with the photographer. Lighting and composition are spot on. I’d have loved to see what the shooter could’ve pulled out of this with a bit more time and conversation. Get him to take his jacket off, sit on the tires. Have him roll his shoulders before you take a photo so that his muscles can relax and he can grow comfortable with a camera in his face. Working folks are tough to photograph, but you pulled a solid image out of this.
Third place is almost-but-not-quite-there. The lighting scheme is solid for an athlete, but be aware of the lack of light you put on faces, as the shadows sink so deep in his eyes that I can’t see them. A well-placed reflector would have given the subject some catchlights in their eyes which would’ve given me more of a connection with him.
Honourable mention AP1 is a strong subject and technically solid, good lighting, but lacks space to allow his face to tell me its story. it’s also on a bit of a funny angle, which has a frame running through his head and cuts off at strange parts of his face. This could have benefitted from a better crop, but more so needs more context if the desired outcome is an EVP, or more dramatic lighting and a different angle if it’s to be a straight portrait of a serious subject rather than in the middle of conversation.
Honourable mention CGD03 is a great subject with lots of great natural elements in background and foreground, but rather than capturing him in the middle of pulling up the net, get him to hold it up and keep it up! Don’t be afraid to pose your subject. This could have been a very compelling portrait by using the net, with fish, as a scrim to shoot through to get his face closer, straight on, while maintaining the context of his vocation as a visual element.
Pose your subjects, and spend some time with them. You’ll be surprised what you can pull out by just asking questions, listening to answers, and finding the essence of your subject to make a solid frame with.
PORTRAITS Or, how I got a guy to pose nude with a banana.
Srsly guise, I need to hear the story about this one…
1 - CGD02
2 - NP03
3 - NP02
HMs - AP1 & CGD03
Overall, this category was fairly strong, with some great subjects and interesting graphic elements.
First place is a great frame. Beautiful colours, mysterious subject, very simple, direct, natural. This photo draws me in and makes me ask questions, but also gives me enough of the subject to understand a bit about her. I would have liked to see more of what looks like her sleeping area, to the left of the frame, but it provides me with a lot of data to read a story into and it’s aesthetically pleasing from a compositional point of view.
Second place is such a curmudgeonly image. Dude’s got so much character, but this didn’t place higher because of a lack visual dialogue with the photographer. Lighting and composition are spot on. I’d have loved to see what the shooter could’ve pulled out of this with a bit more time and conversation. Get him to take his jacket off, sit on the tires. Have him roll his shoulders before you take a photo so that his muscles can relax and he can grow comfortable with a camera in his face. Working folks are tough to photograph, but you pulled a solid image out of this.
Third place is almost-but-not-quite-there. The lighting scheme is solid for an athlete, but be aware of the lack of light you put on faces, as the shadows sink so deep in his eyes that I can’t see them. A well-placed reflector would have given the subject some catchlights in their eyes which would’ve given me more of a connection with him.
Honourable mention AP1 is a strong subject and technically solid, good lighting, but lacks space to allow his face to tell me its story. it’s also on a bit of a funny angle, which has a frame running through his head and cuts off at strange parts of his face. This could have benefitted from a better crop, but more so needs more context if the desired outcome is an EVP, or more dramatic lighting and a different angle if it’s to be a straight portrait of a serious subject rather than in the middle of conversation.
Honourable mention CGD03 is a great subject with lots of great natural elements in background and foreground, but rather than capturing him in the middle of pulling up the net, get him to hold it up and keep it up! Don’t be afraid to pose your subject. This could have been a very compelling portrait by using the net, with fish, as a scrim to shoot through to get his face closer, straight on, while maintaining the context of his vocation as a visual element.
Pose your subjects, and spend some time with them. You’ll be surprised what you can pull out by just asking questions, listening to answers, and finding the essence of your subject to make a solid frame with.
MULTIPIX
MULTIPLE PICTURES
1 - CGD03
2 - CGD01
3 - CGD02
Only one photographer entered three sets into this category, I would strongly advise folks to reconsider what they believe a picture story/essay is, as you don’t always need foreign or controversial content to tell stories. There are stories all around, some big, some small. It’s our responsibility to tell them.
First place is a great “day in the life” feature of this woman Laura Avila. Living on a pile of refuse is not a life that many of us can recognize as being akin to our own, however the photographer assembled a solid edit of images which give the subject prominence in their daily activities, and gives them dignity in a situation many of us might want help out from. The subject is humanized through a series of images which take us from wide, giving context to the subject, through to tight-tight-tight to see hands that could easily be our grandmothers’ hands.
Second place is yet again a good “day in the life” feature of a group of fishermen. Technically perfect, lots of breathing room to take in the locale and context. Solidly composed and edited images, however it falls flat in that it doesn’t delve deeper. I would love to see where these men call home, if they go to the bodega and straight home, or if one of them heads to the bar. I want to know something about these people’s lives, and I don’t get that in this beyond their vocation.
Third place is a gritty street story that shows me a lot of drug use and not much else beyond. It tips its toe into a deeper underlying family issue, and the wider political context, but ultimately lacks direction and is focused on the direct subject matter of the petty drug trade rather than the human dimension of what happens to these young men after the sun falls.
Updated Points 1,845 - Chris Donovan 1,140 - Vanessa Tignanelli 545 - Andrew Ryan 520 - Noah Park 300 - Yader Guzman 220 - Bea Serdon 175 - Lori Christmas 100 - Colin Emerson 60 - Raven McCoy 50 - Jonny Ludlow 50 - Liam Smyth 25 - Curtis O’Connor 20 - Aman Parhar Past Points 1,385 - Chris Donovan (+460) 1,055 - Vanessa Tignanelli (+85) 545 - Andrew Ryan 435 - Noah Park (+85) 275 - Yader Guzman (+25) 175 - Lori Christmas 100 - Taylor Bertelink 100 - Bea Serdon (+110) 60 - Raven McCoy 50 - Liam Smyth 25 - Curtis O’Connor 10 - Aman Parhar (+10) 0 - Colin Emerson (+100) 0 - Jonny Ludlow (+50)
Points
Points are awarded for 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and Honourable Mentions.
1st place - 100
2nd place - 50
3d place - 25
HM - 10