This October POM was judged by Ian Wilms and Marta Iwanek.
FEATURE
1. FEANovCGD01
(25/11/2016) BELLEVILLE, Ont. - Andy Wu prepares his lure before casting into the Bay of Quinte on a cold and foggy night at Zwicks Park. Photo: Chris Donovan 2 |
2. FEANovCGD03
HM. FEANovVGT1
Comments: 1st place was immediately obvious. Painterly and timeless. Draws the viewer into the potential narrative. 2nd place is a balanced, artistic composition, with a beautiful colour palette. 3rd, great moment. Very tongue-in-cheek. HM made us laugh instantly, which is why it got the HM. The composition held it back from placing higher.
NEWS
1. NEWNovVGT3
2. NEWNovVGT2
3. NEWnovAPR4
TORONTO, Ont. - Andrea MccAnn travelled from Buffalo, NY to stand against Trump in Toronto, on Nov. 19, 2016. Photo by Andrew Ryan
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HM. NEWnovAPR2
Comments: 1st is beautiful. Nice use of your surroundings to make what could have been a cliche protest scene into an image which delivers the news with artistry. 2nd, intelligent frame, but the tilt hurts it. Seeing City Hall wouldn’t have been so bad. I’m also not into the eye contact. With all this griping, you may think I don’t like this image, but that’s not true. The interaction with the water of the fountain connects this image of the protest with the Standing Rock movement going on in North Dakota. 3rd, there’s a lot of information in this image. I like how the sheet seems somehow sinister. Clean background is a plus. The foreground is distracting, but it’s also part of the story and you’ve managed it well by stopping down a bit. Nice. HM, solid news photograph, nice light and moment, but REALLY needs a crop in order to function. The guy’s face on the right and the mysterious black object/flashing orange hand in the top left hurt this frame.
SPORTS
1. SPTNovVGT1
2. SPTNovYAG9
Comments: 1st is beautiful. Nice use of your surroundings to make what could have been a cliche protest scene into an image which delivers the news with artistry. 2nd, intelligent frame, but the tilt hurts it. Seeing City Hall wouldn’t have been so bad. I’m also not into the eye contact. With all this griping, you may think I don’t like this image, but that’s not true. The interaction with the water of the fountain connects this image of the protest with the Standing Rock movement going on in North Dakota. 3rd, there’s a lot of information in this image. I like how the sheet seems somehow sinister. Clean background is a plus. The foreground is distracting, but it’s also part of the story and you’ve managed it well by stopping down a bit. Nice. HM, solid news photograph, nice light and moment, but REALLY needs a crop in order to function. The guy’s face on the right and the mysterious black object/flashing orange hand in the top left hurt this frame.
1. SPTNovVGT1
2. SPTNovYAG9
3. SPTNovCGD02
PORTRAIT
1. PRTNovYAG2
2.PRTNovCGD01
3. PRTNovCGD02
2) MPXNovCGD01
(25/11/2016) BELLEVILLE, Ont. - Loyalist College guard, Forest Maracle rushes past a St. Lawrence College defender to score a basket. St. Lawrence went on to win the game 66-47. Photo: Chris Donovan
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COMMENTS: 1ST HAS NICE EMOTION AND VULNERABILITY. SHE’S CLEARLY BEEN SPORTSING TO HER LIMIT. THERE IS REAL HUMANITY HERE, WHICH ELEVATES THIS FRAME ABOVE TYPICAL SPORTS ACTION. 2ND VERSE, SAME AS THE FIRST, ALTHOUGH NOT QUITE AS GOOD. IT’S LIKE A PAINTING OF A SPORTSER. THE BOTTLE IS A TELLING DETAIL OF HIS EXPERIENCE. SHOWS AN UNEXPECTED MOMENT FROM MUAY THAI BOXING. 3RD CLASSIC SPORTSING ACTION HERE. NICE JOB. ALSO NICE TO SEE THAT CAMERA TECHNOLOGY HAS PROGRESSED TO THE POINT THAT YOU CAN GET A SHARP SHOT OF BASKETBALL IN THE LOYALIST GYM.
1. PRTNovYAG2
2.PRTNovCGD01
(25/11/2016) BELLEVILLE, Ont. - Andy Wu prepares his lure before casting into the Bay of Quinte on a cold and foggy night at Zwicks Park. Photo: Chris Donovan
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Comments: 1st was a clear winner out of this group. Good balance of face and environment with strong emotion. Very striking photo. One of my favourite images of the bay that I’ve seen. 2nd classic, clean headshot. A bit dark on the left, but it’s okay. Mostly black with a pop of red catches the eye. 3rd, had I not seen the much stronger version of this same scene in the Feature category, I might have initially liked this one more. Interesting moment that is shot close enough to hold up as a portrait.
MULTIPIX
1) MPXNovCGD02
Comments: You really like farms. The potato farmer story has some strong frames, but it strays a bit into the cliché. We want to see more emotion and motivation within the subject. Generally well-shot and composed, but the narrative doesn’t have enough of an arc. You won because you’re a strong photographer, but you need to spend more time with the subject to understand him better and build further trust. The Amish story is strange because you showed more meat than faces. That’s cool, but the lack of faces kind of makes it feel like a horror movie. Still, some super strong frames in here. That first image swept us off our feet.
PS — Yader Guzman, why was your photo story filed in the Feature category? I see a lot of potential there. Maybe it’s not done yet and that’s okay. Keep working on it and you’ll win this category next time.
OVERALL: I’m really impressed with the level of talent at Loyalist these days. Great job, all!
Updated Points
1,235 - Chris Donovan
980 - Vanessa Tignanelli
445 - Andrew Ryan
435 - Noah Park
275 - Yader Guzman
175 - Lori Christmas
100 - Taylor Bertelink
100 - Beatrice Serdon
60 - Raven McCoy Barnwell
50 - Liam Smyth
25 - Curtis O'Connor
10 - Aman Parhar
Past Points
835 - Chris Donovan +400
720 - Vanessa Tignanelli +260
435 - Noah Park
385 - Andrew Ryan +60
175 - Lori Christmas
125 - Yader Guzman +150
100 - Taylor Bertelink
100 - Beatrice Serdon
60 - Raven McCoy Barnwell
50 - Liam Smyth
25 - Curtis O'Connor
10 - Aman Parhar
Points
Points are awarded for 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and Honourable Mentions.
1st place - 100
2nd place - 50
3d place - 25
HM - 10
1st place - 100
2nd place - 50
3d place - 25
HM - 10