Summer 2016 Results
The summer edition of POM was judged by Andrew Vaughan, a Canadian Press photographer based on the East coast (@cppixhalifax).
From Andrew,
It was lots of fun and it was a pleasure to see the variety and quality of the work.
I made a few comments about cropping and shooting horizontally but generally I was impressed by what I saw. I’m a big fan of the program at Loyalist and have had the pleasure of working with many of the graduates over the years.
Best of luck with the school year.
Cheers.
I made a few comments about cropping and shooting horizontally but generally I was impressed by what I saw. I’m a big fan of the program at Loyalist and have had the pleasure of working with many of the graduates over the years.
FIRST YEAR
NEWS
This is a great example of a solid general news photo.
It tells the story in clear fashion and doesn’t exploit the subjects.
Not sure about the crop as it works even better as a straight horizontal.
Second place:
The Tragically Hip concert was played out across the country. There is a certain intimacy that this frame captures. I little bit of dodging and burning might be in order.
Third place:
This is a run-of-the-mill forest fire photo. But then I opened this frame up in PS and cropped it tighter. Stunning.
FEATURE
First place:
A great Canada Day feature. All of the elements are there. Joyful.
Second place:
Bit of a crop moves this to another level.
Third place:
GUELPH, Ont. (24/07/16) - Sisters strike a perfect pose with their favourite treats at Guelph's Hillside Festival on July 24, 2016. Photo by Vanessa Tignanelli. |
The photo needs some room to breathe. Shot as a horizontal and cropped looser to see where they are-beach, fairground etc.
SPORTS
First Place:
You really need to have the rest of the body in the frame to make this work.
As there were only two entries, there is no second or third place.
PORTRAIT
First place:
A well executed environmental portrait. The lighting is great and the “gunslinger” pose adds to the story telling.
Second place:
Simple and sad.
Third place:
I’m not sure the vertical crop adds anything. All of the elements are there without our eyes being drawn away by the bright light at the top of the frame. That said, both the second and third place portraits show that the photographer can engage their subjects and present an honest portrait.
MULTI-PICTURE
First place:
A very pice set of pictures. The first photo is a strong abstract that anchors the rest. Great use of the available light from backlight sun to the headlamps. A couple of the photos were a bit confusing but worked as a whole. I think multi-pix slideshows work better if all of the images are horizontal.
(I worked on a CPR gang in Southern Alberta when I was in photo school-swinging hammers and running machinery.)
SECOND YEAR
NEWS
First place:
This is what you want when you are covering a politician at a public event. There is great animation and excitement. I covered this event last year before he was elected. It’s a tough crowd to work. Well done.
Second place:
It’s a regular assignment. A charity fundraiser. You show up and work it. If you make a frame like this you should be pleased. Cropped a bit tighter on the right and the top and your done.
Third place:
Good use of the backlight. It looks ominous. Photos like this can serve as great filers instead of the ubiquitous yellow police tape.
FEATURE
First place:
Good use of negative space. By not cropping tight to the subject you get s sense of height and motion.
Second place:
This is an honest but sad photo. People appear to be oblivious and as a document of difficult times, this photo speaks volumes.
Third place:
Tight crop provides for a view of the intensity in barrel racing. It’s not the easiest rodeo event to shoot because all they are doing is going around barrels but there is a lot going on between the rider and horse.
Second place:
Third place:
Milton, Ont. (27/06/16)— Hugo Barrette, a 25 year-old Canadian cyclist competing in Rio Olympics 2016, practicing in Mattamy National Cycling Centre, Milton. Photo by Noah Park. |
A good job with panning. You would get a better sense of speed with an even slower shutter speed and more blurring of the background.
PORTRAIT
First place
Strong emotional portrait. There is a lot going on here. The caption tells the story but this shows the story.
Second place:
A tough to shoot portrait. There is a connection with the photographer and the picture works. The background is a bit busy but somethings you can’t control.
Third place:
SAINT JOHN, NB. (06/10/2016) - Saint John mayor Don Darling poses in his office after being sworn in as the 57th mayor of Canada’s oldest official city. Photo: Chris Donovan |
High quality magazine portrait. I would have cropped the distracting light on the left side and while giving up some of the skyline. Well done though.
Honourable mention:
A bit of verite. There is a nice quality to the totally relaxed expression.
MULTI-PICTURE
First place:
This is great job on a photo story. The story is well told and the news is covered. It doesn’t hurt that the town is decked in Acadian colours and everyone is in a good mood, but there are several individual photos in the set that can stand alone.
Second place:
This story is straight forward but some of the photos are confusing. I’m not sure what the purpose of the combos is in the first and second photos in the series. All of the elements are there and all this story really needs is a tight edit. Having said that, the photographer did engage the subject and we get a window on youth labour.
525 - Vanessa Tignanelli
400 - Chris Donovan
200 - Andrew Ryan
125 - Noah Park
125 - Lori Christmas
100 - Taylor Bertelink
60 - Raven McCoy Barnwell
50 - Liam Smyth
Points
525 - Vanessa Tignanelli
400 - Chris Donovan
200 - Andrew Ryan
125 - Noah Park
125 - Lori Christmas
100 - Taylor Bertelink
60 - Raven McCoy Barnwell
50 - Liam Smyth
Points
Points are awarded for 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and Honorable Mentions.
1st place - 100
2nd place - 50
3d place - 25
HM - 10
1st place - 100
2nd place - 50
3d place - 25
HM - 10